Vice chancellor decries invasion of varsitys land

Here is a rewritten version of the sentence in a more formal and professional tone:

"The Vice-Chancellor of the university has expressed strong condemnation of the recent invasion of the institution's land by unauthorized individuals or groups."

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Here is the rewritten sentence in a more conversational tone:

"The university's Vice-Chancellor is really upset about the recent invasion of their land by people who shouldn't be there."

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