Rights group china must stop pressuring advocates un
Here is a rewritten version of the sentence:
"Rights group urges China to stop pressuring advocates under the guise of national security."
Here's a breakdown of the changes I made:
- "rights group" is a more concise and clear way to refer to an organization that advocates for human rights.
- "must" is a strong word that implies a sense of obligation, but it's not necessary in this context. "Urges" is a more polite and effective way to express the group's request.
- "stop pressuring advocates" is a clear and concise way to describe the action the group is asking China to take.
- "under the guise of national security" adds context and specificity to the request, explaining why the group is concerned about China's actions.
Here is the rewritten sentence:
Rights group urges China to stop pressuring advocates under the guise of national security.